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breathe

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Steph again.
Give me something else to photograph, world, and I will take it!

Even though I do quite like this. I haven't changed the size or anything, so I hope my composition skills are acceptable. In other words, I hope you aren't scrambling to put your exploded eyeballs back together as you read this. That in itself would be a pretty amazing thing to do, so kudos if you are.. not that I want to explode your face with my photography. Well, maybe if it was an exploded face in a good way. Buh.

Entered into *my-dark-desire's contest: [link]
Image size
900x684px 85.24 KB
Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 1000D
Shutter Speed
1/10 second
Aperture
F/5.6
Focal Length
46 mm
ISO Speed
1600
Date Taken
Jan 10, 2010, 11:05:36 PM
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Jester1992's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Hey, (Hope you like the way I critique <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug" />)
On this photo there is a lot of white space. I know that's kind of pointing out the obvious, but I find that it adds meaning.
The character in the photo I think has her eyes closed, and I guess it could be argued that all the white is contrasting what she would be seeing with her eyes closed.
I think you did very well with this image, with the black and white, and the feeling of movement given through the model and in particular, her hair.
Very well done, perhaps next time, color, have the model stand still so you get more depth and detail in the shot, but I think the way this one turned out without all of that is still just as expressive and artistic.
Congratulations. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" />

~Jester<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="15" height="13" alt=":heart:" title="Heart" />